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The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The visualized map which comes with clear legends illustrates the
City
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 of Pellington, a
city
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 15 kilometres away from Hampford
City
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 where 120.000 people live. As shown on the map, there are three
supermarket
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 proposed
site
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 points in the
City
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 of Pellington, marked by letters A, B, and
C
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. Each
supermarket
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site
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-to-be has its own advantages and disadvantages
according to
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 its location. Starting with
site
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 A,
this
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site
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 is filled with many supporting aspects around. It is located surrounded by residential areas, traffic-free zones, parks and countryside areas.
In addition
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, the airport and industrial
area
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 are located across the
railway
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 from the
site
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. Up in the northeast from the main district
area
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,
site
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 B is located where
this
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site
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 is ringed by a countryside
area
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 only. In spite of that,
this
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site
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 is still reachable from the residential
area
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 though it is separated by a motorway. For the
last
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 proposed
site
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, located on the southern side of the
railway
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,
site
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C
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 is encircled with countryside, industrial and residential areas.
Site
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C
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 is as distant from the airport as
site
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 A is.
However
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,
this
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site
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 and the airport are not separated by the
railway
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. Looking at the demand for the new
supermarket
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 based on where they are located, it is quite obvious that
site
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 A has many advantages from its surroundings
although
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 some of the demand projections are across the
railway
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.
Furthermore
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,
this
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 is the nearest
site
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 to Hampford
City
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 which could be one of the
supermarket
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's target markets
besides
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 Pellington citizens.
Site
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C
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 actually has plus points almost as many as
site
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 A does, but
on the other hand
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,
site
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C
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 is located quite out of the main
city
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area
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, supermarket, site, c, area, railway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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