The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The visualized map which comes with clear legends illustrates the
City
of Pellington, a
city
15 kilometres away from Hampford
City
where 120.000 people live. As shown on the map, there are three
supermarket
proposed
site
points in the
City
of Pellington, marked by letters A, B, and
C
. Each
supermarket
site
-to-be has its own advantages and disadvantages
according to
its location. Starting with
site
A,
this
site
is filled with many supporting aspects around. It is located surrounded by residential areas, traffic-free zones, parks and countryside areas.
In addition
, the airport and industrial
area
are located across the
railway
from the
site
. Up in the northeast from the main district
area
,
site
B is located where
this
site
is ringed by a countryside
area
only. In spite of that,
this
site
is still reachable from the residential
area
though it is separated by a motorway. For the
last
proposed
site
, located on the southern side of the
railway
,
site
C
is encircled with countryside, industrial and residential areas.
Site
C
is as distant from the airport as
site
A is.
However
,
this
site
and the airport are not separated by the
railway
. Looking at the demand for the new
supermarket
based on where they are located, it is quite obvious that
site
A has many advantages from its surroundings
although
some of the demand projections are across the
railway
.
Furthermore
,
this
is the nearest
site
to Hampford
City
which could be one of the
supermarket
's target markets
besides
Pellington citizens.
Site
C
actually has plus points almost as many as
site
A does, but
on the other hand
,
site
C
is located quite out of the main
city
area
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, supermarket, site, c, area, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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