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The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.

The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.
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The 2 graphs illustrate what kind of
books
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people
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 under 30 years old read and how many
books
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 they read
according to
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 their ages divided into 3 groups.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 all the different
age
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 groups read mostly printed
books
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 and
people
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 who read the most are aged between 16 and 17. Printed
books
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 are the most read type of book with more than 85% of
people
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 aged between 16 and 17, followed by those aged between 18 and 24 with 73% and in third position, the 25 to 29 category of
age
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 with just over 70%. In comparison, Audiobooks are the least read
books
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 by all the
age
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 groups with 16% of
people
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 aged between 16 and 17, just over 10% for those who are between 18 to 24 years old and 15% for those aged between 25 to 29.
However
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, 90% of the youngest
age
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 group read the higher number of
books
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 in 2012 which represents an average of 12
books
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.
In addition
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, 79% of
people
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 aged 18 to 24 read a book in 2012
while
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 81% did for those aged 25 to 29.
Nevertheless
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, they read respectively an equal number of
books
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 which represents an average of 11
books
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 each .
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