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The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.

The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.
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The 2 graphs illustrate what kind of
books
people
 under 30 years old read and how many
books
 they read
according to
 their ages divided into 3 groups.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 all the different
age
 groups read mostly printed
books
 and
people
 who read the most are aged between 16 and 17. Printed
books
 are the most read type of book with more than 85% of
people
 aged between 16 and 17, followed by those aged between 18 and 24 with 73% and in third position, the 25 to 29 category of
age
 with just over 70%. In comparison, Audiobooks are the least read
books
 by all the
age
 groups with 16% of
people
 aged between 16 and 17, just over 10% for those who are between 18 to 24 years old and 15% for those aged between 25 to 29.
However
, 90% of the youngest
age
 group read the higher number of
books
 in 2012 which represents an average of 12
books
.
In addition
, 79% of
people
 aged 18 to 24 read a book in 2012
while
 81% did for those aged 25 to 29.
Nevertheless
, they read respectively an equal number of
books
 which represents an average of 11
books
 each .
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