In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

It is considered that in many countries

parents

not

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spend enough

time

with their

offsprings

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and

this

problem can lead to many mental issues

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on

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children

. In my point of view, all family members will be affected

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groups can

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more

impacts

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this

problem.

To begin

with, nowadays it can be observed that each family member has their own job

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reason

parents

come home late usually and they can not share

quailty

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quality

time

with their

children

.

Moreover

, some

people

not

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realise how vital to spare

time

with their own

offsprings

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for instance

if the

child

grow

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up with careless

parents

,

child

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the child

a child

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will be struggle with some mental health issues

such

as attachment problems.

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, it is obvious that

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significant

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effect on

children

.

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, selfishness can be another reason

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issue and

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is

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also

impact

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on

child

dangerous way. Lately,

people

wants

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to more care about themselves and they want to create their own self-place. It can

be seem

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benefical

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beneficial

for

individual

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to build a self area

however

specifically

children

will

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negatively

for

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condition.

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,

people

who

acting

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selfish and careless to their

children

they

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will

be deeply regret

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to

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their reaction because one day

this

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these children

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child

grow up and probably will be as selfish as their

parents

. In conclusion, many

people

thinks

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that recently

people

do not spare

time

with their

offsprings

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and

children

who lack

of

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spend

time

with their

parents

will

be have

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some difficulties in their future life.