In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

It is considered that in many countries
parents
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spend enough
time
with their
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and
this
problem can lead to many mental issues
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children
. In my point of view, all family members will be affected
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this
problem.
To begin
with, nowadays it can be observed that each family member has their own job
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reason
parents
come home late usually and they can not share
quailty
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quality
time
with their
children
.
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, some
people
not
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realise how vital to spare
time
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for instance
if the
child
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up with careless
parents
,
child
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will be struggle with some mental health issues
such
as attachment problems.
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, it is obvious that
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significant
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effect on
children
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issue and
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child
dangerous way. Lately,
people
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to more care about themselves and they want to create their own self-place. It can
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benefical
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beneficial
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to build a self area
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specifically
children
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negatively
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condition.
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,
people
who
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selfish and careless to their
children
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to
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their reaction because one day
this
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child
grow up and probably will be as selfish as their
parents
. In conclusion, many
people
thinks
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that recently
people
do not spare
time
with their
offsprings
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and
children
who lack
of
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spend
time
with their
parents
will
be have
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some difficulties in their future life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work demands
  • longer working hours
  • digital technology
  • screen time
  • urbanization
  • commuting times
  • emotional distance
  • parental guidance
  • harmful behaviors
  • guilt
  • stress
  • missed opportunities
  • development
  • emotional well-being
  • social skills
  • family dynamics
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