The table and grap below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releavant.
The table presented data about the
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
going to the Use synonyms
cinema
and the average number of Use synonyms
cinema
visitors between 1995 and 2003, and the line graph depicts the average number of Use synonyms
cinema
-goers in terms of four Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
in Use synonyms
Auckland
city.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
percentage
of residents of Use synonyms
Auckland
that visited the Use synonyms
cinema
was the same in 1997, 1999, and 2003. Use synonyms
While
the largest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
who went to the Use synonyms
cinema
in Use synonyms
Auckland
was in 2001, more individuals visited the Use synonyms
cinema
in 1997, on average. In terms of Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
, most of the Use synonyms
cinema
visitors were 14-24 Use synonyms
years
old. Use synonyms
However
, all Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
groups
had the same trends during the period shown.
Starting at 67% in 1995, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
cinema
visitors in Use synonyms
Auckland
rose to 72% in 1997 and remained steady for the next three Use synonyms
years
and reached its highest Use synonyms
percentage
in 2001, at 80%. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
cinema
-goers dropped to 72% in 2003, as same as in 1997 and 1999. In 1995, the average proportion of Use synonyms
cinema
visits was 10.3, increasing to its peak at 11.2 in 1997. Two Use synonyms
years
later, the figures for average Use synonyms
cinema
visits hit an all-time low at 7.3 but rose to 8.4 in 2001 and remained almost the same until 2003, at 8.3.
Looking at the line graph, the biggest part of Use synonyms
people
visiting the Use synonyms
cinema
in Use synonyms
Auckland
were aged 14-24. Use synonyms
People
more than 50 Use synonyms
years
old had the least tendency to go to the Use synonyms
cinema
, fluctuating between 8 and 10 over the period from 1995 to 2003. Notably, visiting cinemas plummeted in all Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
in 1999.Use synonyms
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