The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph compares how many tourists
visiting
a particular Caribbean Wrong verb form
visited
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the three different visitors
staying
on Wrong verb form
stayed
island
and on cruise ships in Add an article
the island
time
period. Add an article
the time
a time
While
the visitors
staying on cruise ships and Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
island
increased gradually, the total rose rapidly.
As the graph shows, Fix the agreement mistake
islands
visitors
staying on cruise ships in the beginning was around 0.25 in 2010. Then
went up slightly to 0.5 in 2011, but declined moderately to approximately 0.27 in 2012. Afterward
, Change the spelling
Afterwards
visitors
staying started climbed
gradually to 2 between 2013 and 2017. The Wrong verb form
climbing
visitors
staying on Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
island
in the beginning was around 0.75 in 2010 and kept unchanged until 2011. Add an article
an island
the island
Then
growed
significantly to 1.5 from 2011 to 2013 and remained Verb problem
it grew
constantly
til 2015, but fell slightly to approximately 1.3 in 2016. After Change the word
constant
jumped
sharply to 1.5 in 2017. Regarding Wrong verb form
jumping
total
, in the Correct article usage
the total
beginning
was Add a comma
beginning,
with
1 in 2010. Change preposition
apply
Change the spelling
Afterwards
Afterward
total Add a comma
Afterward,
visitors
increased gradually to around 2.7 between 2010 and 2016. Then
total Correct your spelling
The
visitors
rose quickly to 3.5 in 2017.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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