The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
The graph compares five different universities in terms of the average number of hours
students
study on weekdays and Use synonyms
weekends
.
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Overall
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while
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university
C Use synonyms
students
spent the most time studying during the week, on Use synonyms
weekends
, Use synonyms
university
A Use synonyms
students
spent the majority of their time studying.
As the graph shows, on weekdays, the Use synonyms
students
of Use synonyms
the
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apply
university
C Use synonyms
we're
studying the most at 10.6, Correct your spelling
were
whereas
the figure was the lowest in Linking Words
the
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apply
university
D at 9.6. The Use synonyms
students
of universities B and E Use synonyms
spend
time at 10.1 and 10, respectively, but the Wrong verb form
spent
university
's A index was 9.8.
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By contrast
, on Linking Words
weekends
, Use synonyms
the
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apply
university
A has most of the Use synonyms
students
studying at 9:00, Use synonyms
while
the fewest hours are spent studying at Linking Words
the
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apply
university
D at 9.6. The figures for universities B and C were 8.6 and 7.8, respectively. The average number of hours that Use synonyms
university
E Use synonyms
students
spend on Use synonyms
weekends
was 6.2.Use synonyms
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