The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
The graph compares five different universities in terms of the average number of hours
students
study on weekdays and weekends
.
Overall
, while
university
C students
spent the most time studying during the week, on weekends
, university
A students
spent the majority of their time studying.
As the graph shows, on weekdays, the students
of the
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university
C we're
studying the most at 10.6, Correct your spelling
were
whereas
the figure was the lowest in the
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university
D at 9.6. The students
of universities B and E spend
time at 10.1 and 10, respectively, but the Wrong verb form
spent
university
's A index was 9.8.
By contrast
, on weekends
, the
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university
A has most of the students
studying at 9:00, while
the fewest hours are spent studying at the
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university
D at 9.6. The figures for universities B and C were 8.6 and 7.8, respectively. The average number of hours that university
E students
spend on weekends
was 6.2.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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