the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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The line graph provides figures of
shpos
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shops
that closed and digit of new
shops
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that opened in a nation between 2011 and 2018.
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, it can be easily seen that a
notibale
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notable
fluctuation in numbers of closing and opening
shops
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over the period. A sharp decrease was seen in 2015 to just under 1,000 in closing
shops
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. It is interesting to notice that opening
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had
raisen
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risen
raised
over all
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overall
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period. It started with just under 9,000
shops
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in 2011 after that decreased to reach exactly 4,000.
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, opening
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from 2015 to 2017 remained stable.
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