Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of cloth, cars and other items. what are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Present
, people are likely to buy their everyday Change preposition
At present
stuffs
from famous Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
brands
. There can be a lot of reasons for purchasing including branding, quanlity
, fashion, Correct your spelling
quantity
truthworthy
, or Correct your spelling
trustworthy
valueable
. For clothes and accessories, it's not essential to buy from the big Correct your spelling
valuable
brands
. There are penty
of Correct your spelling
plenty
small
Add an article
a small
store
that Fix the agreement mistake
stores
sale
high Replace the word
sell
quanlity
Correct your spelling
quality
stuffs
Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
with
Change preposition
at
resonable
Correct your spelling
reasonable
price
. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
However
, there are some category
Fix the agreement mistake
categories
that
is
more beneficial to buy from market Correct subject-verb agreement
are
brand
Change the noun form
brands
such
as electrical equipment and car
. The pros of buying from big Fix the agreement mistake
cars
brands
including
Replace the word
include
truthworthy
and after-sale Correct your spelling
trustworthy
truth worthy
survice
.
Correct your spelling
service
survive
Firstly
, buying from market brands
is more truthful and likely to confirm the good quanlity
of products. Correct your spelling
quality
For example
, there are two company
selling the same Fix the agreement mistake
companies
labtop
at the same price. The first Correct your spelling
laptop
company
have run their business for a long time and have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
vary
models in the market. Meanwhile, the second Replace the word
various
company
only have 2-3 models and quite
new Add a missing verb
are quite
for
Change preposition
in
this
area. Thus
, the first company
is more truthful and people are likely to buy from the first company
.
Secondly
, another important factor is after-sales service and repair
. For example
, the
Correct article usage
apply
mass production
car companies Add a hyphen
mass-production
such
as toyota
, honda, and Change the capitalization
Toyota
mazda
have low Change the capitalization
Mazda
repair
cost
and quick Fix the agreement mistake
costs
repair
leading time
. Fix the agreement mistake
times
This
is because the
have Correct your spelling
they
huge
number of selling and a lot of spare parts in stock. Change the article
a huge
the huge
Therefore
, when it comes to repair
, they can find parts or equipment easily and fast.
To sum up
, buying from famous brands
is both positive and negative developement
depending on Correct your spelling
development
category
of Add an article
the category
stuffs
. For goods that need after-sales service, purchasing from big Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
brands
is more beneficial.Submitted by phunika_j on
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