The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.
The diagram compares three
purposes
in terms of the visitors who came to the UK
during the 20-year period between 1989 and 2009.
Overall
, the three purposes
experienced different trends. While
visitors for holiday and business purposes
went up with some fluctuations, people
who came to visit friends or relatives experienced an upward trend.
As the graph shows, visitors for holiday purposes
started at 6.5 million
in 1989. Then
, this
figure increased rapidly to 9 million
in 1999, followed by a small decrease to 7 million
in 2004. By 2009, 8.8 million
people
had come to the UK
for holidays. Regarding business aims, in 1989, 5.3 million
people
came to the UK
. Afterwards, this
index fell to 4 million
in 1993, followed by considerable
rise to 7 Add an article
a considerable
the considerable
million
in 1999. Then
, there was a fluctuation between 2000 and 2009.
By contrast
, people
who came to the UK
to visit their friends or relatives were around 3.9 million
in 1989, followed by enormous growth to 7 million
in 2004. Then
, there was a steep decline to 6 million
in 2009.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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