The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
The given bar chart and table depict the
number
of hospital bunks per thousand people
and government expenditure on health
.
Overall
, government health
spending in Japan
is the least among the two other countries but its life expectancy as well as
the number
of hospital bunks is the highest. On the contrary
, the government health
expenditure in the US is the highest but its people
's lifespan can not surpass Japan
's.
In detail, the health
spending in the US is $6,719 per person while
most people
there are likely to reach 78 years old in age, less than Netherlands and Japan
. Even the number
of hospital beds
in the US is below those two countries. Apparently, the institution budget that has been issued is not efficient enough because of the lesser output. Meanwhile, Netherlands
seems to manage its Correct article usage
the Netherlands
health
spending better. It has been proven from the longer its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
's life
which is around 80 years and Fix the agreement mistake
lives
also
the more hospital beds
. Above them all, Japan
is the most efficient one. The expenditure of healthcare is just $2,581 per person but its people
's lifespan exceeds 80 years old. In addition
, the number
of hospital bunks in there is the highest too.
It is also
displayed in the graph that a country like Germany has a quite high number
of hospital beds
, approximately 8 beds
per one thousand people
.Submitted by srsdy008 on
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