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The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.

The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
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the lines in the graph show
informations
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information
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 about how
much
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many
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Iranian
,
Greek
 and
Turkish
students
 who at Sheffield University from 2005 and 2009.
Iranian
 and
Turkish
,
Students
 in 2005 were so close in numbers, But
Greek
students
where
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were much
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mutch
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much
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 higher
then
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than
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 both
of
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apply
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Iranian
 and
Turkish
students
, as
the
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yours go we can see that
Iranian
 and
Turkish
, numbers start going up, From 2005
untall
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until
 2006 start going up,
Iranian
students
 were 40 international
students
 now in 2006
thay
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they
 are above 60
students
,
also
Turkish
students
 were 20 in 2005, now they are 40, And
Greek
number
 of
students
 start going dawn in 2005 they were 180, after 2006 the
number
 is decreasing
alot
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a lot
, in 2007 the
number
 of
students
 was steady, but in 2008
it's start
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it starts
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 going dawn
agein
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again
agein'
. The
number
 of
student
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students
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start
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started
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 increasing for both
Iranian
 and
Turkish
students
, In 2007 the
number
 of
students
 was above 60 for Iranuan,
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and Trukish
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Trukish
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Turkish
students
 were above 80. and
it's
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start
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started
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 to go up way more in 2008,
Iranian
 was almost 90, and
Turkish
students
 were above
the
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100, and in 2009 both were way higher
then
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Greek
,
Iranian
 160, and
Turkish
students
 140.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words iranian, greek, turkish, students, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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