Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some

individual

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individuals

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thought that the best way to collaborate

different

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with different

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cultures and ages together is

by

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through

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music

. I believe that

music

can benefit a lot to our entire world. Melody can cross the barriers

from

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of

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various languages.

Although

we do not understand the meaning of

forieng

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foreign

lyrics, we do feel the emotion revealed from every

chords

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.

Rhyme

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compose

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by

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many chords

also

express certain

emotion

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emotions

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. Once we feel touched by the melody, we want to understand the story

behind

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behind it

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.

For example

, my favorite singer comes from

korea

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and I do not even know a word in

korea

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.

However

, I

deeply

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am deeply

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attracted by her

music

, especially when I face tough

choice

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choices

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in my life. The excellent

music

still gets attention after decades. Even more,

poeple

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people

cherish the

song

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songs

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they like and share

to

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with

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their children and grandchildren. In

this

way,

music

become a common language between different

generation

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generations

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.

For instance

, There are many

song

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songs

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in my playlist

is

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that were

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released before I

born

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. The reason how I got familiar with them is

because

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my father always

play

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the same song

while

his driving. In conclusion, it is indeed that

music

leads

a

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successful collusion of different cultures and ages. No matter is excellent

music

made by composers or classic songs passed by several generations.