The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
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a number
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student
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students
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from
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Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
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The increasing
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of students are Turkish and Iranian ;throughout four-years
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four years
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Sheffield University ,Change preposition
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whaile
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which
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decreased
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third
Greece
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Greek
student
.
Shown line graph is Irainan individuals in 2005 about 20 Fix the agreement mistake
students
student
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students
comparison
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compared
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students
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about 40 double of Iranian.
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about 180 almost Three-Double
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other
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number
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in 2004.Change preposition
as Turkish
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