The graph below shows average daily sales by number of servings

The graph below shows average daily sales by number of servings
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows average daily sales by number of servings
The bar chart compares how many
servings
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of certain food items are sold every day in two different seasons.
Overall
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, in
winter
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hot
coffee
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and soup are slightly more sold than
other
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the other
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three foods.
While
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iced
coffee
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and ice cream are higher in
summer
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. The figure
of
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for
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salad sold is the same in both seasons. As the graph shows, hot
coffee
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are
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is
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sold above 70
servings
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in
winter
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, but it is decrease rapidly at 30
servings
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in
summer
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. Soup
os
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is
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the
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apply
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one of the most sold categories in
winter
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with
50servings
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50 servings
every day but in
summer
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ounly
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only
about 25
servings
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are sold.
On the other hand
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, iced
coffee
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are
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is
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less sold among other food in
winter
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approximately three
servings
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.
However
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, the number of iced
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coffee
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coffees
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are increase
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increased
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quickly to 40
servings
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in
summer
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. Ice cream is the second most sold food nearly 35
servings
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in
summer
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. In
winter
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also
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it also
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and is lower
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by
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about 10%. Interestingly, sold of salad
is
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apply
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remain unchanged in both seasons.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words servings, winter, coffee, summer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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