The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

The chart reveals the amount of newcomers who attended to the UK, or with numerous destinations, between 1989 and 2009.

Overall

,tourists who arrived for leisure purposes were at the highest level,

while

those visiting friends and relatives were at a lower level. As

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illustrates, no more than 6

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people approached in 1989 to spend their holiday,

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significantly reached a peak with 19

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tourists in 1998. After

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went down sharply

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7

million

quantity in 2004. Regarding the company, it stayed with 11

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newcomers in 1994, after rising significantly

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7

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in 1999.

Following

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point, it increased steadily to around 8

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in 2004.

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with a destination of seeing close people slightly went up roughly in 1994 and 1999 with 4, as well

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million

respectively.

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reached a peak with 7

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citizens from abroad in 2004,

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gradually dropped

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6

million

in 2009.