The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of reasons why African youngsters use their phones in one African country between 2016 to 2019.
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it is clear that
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social media is used by teenagers the most.
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, they barely use their phones to communicate with others.
To begin
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with, social media occupied 50% in 2016 before fluctuating to 51% in 2018. There was an increase in the year 2019 to 56%.
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, young generations are not interested in using phone calls on their mobile. It registered at 10% in 2016
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slightly rose to 13% in 2017,
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, it fell and ended
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5% in 2019.
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, The percentage of emails was about one-fourth in 2016 and dropped by 1% in 2017. It
then
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declined again by 4% and 1% in 2018 and 2019 respectively. In 2016, digital cameras which represented 15% stayed constant to 2016. Afterwards, it escalated to 20% and came in
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second place in 2019.
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