The graph below shows the average muscle change in the prices of copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014.

The graph below shows the average muscle change in the prices of copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average muscle change in the prices of copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014.
The chart compares the mutation fee of copper, zinc, and nickel
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2014.
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, the nickel quotation showed gradual fluctuations over the year,
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copper and zinc prices
kept
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unchanged level. As the graph reveals, the price of Nickel altered at 6% in January, followed by
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immense decrease to around 1% in March,
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it declined slightly
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0.5% after
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significantly to approximately - 3% in June.
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metal's figure went up to nearly 1% in December. Regarding copper's monthly cost, it started with 2% in January,
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slowly dropped to roughly - 1.5% in May.
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this
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, Sharp fluctuated with 0.5% in October, after
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a peak at 1.5% in the month of December.
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expense
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of Zinc grew to about 3% in February, after
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fell
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to about - 1.1% in June. Before witnessing steady growth to - 1.5% and - 1% in July and October, respectively,
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Sharp
rised
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rose
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rapidly to exactly 2% in December.

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