The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The maps present the changes that occurred in the West
Park
Secondary
School
from 1950 to 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, there was a significant increase in the West
Park
secondary
school
, there were many
buildings
that were renovated and became new
buildings
and even there were three times changes. In 1950, there were many
buildings
were built namely Farmland, Playground, Schools, and Houses. Moving to in 1980, the house building had been converted become a Car
Park
and Science block, and
then
, the farmland beside the house building had been changed and it changed become a sports field.
Besides
that, for
school
and playground still remained. After 30 years, there were significant changes to some
buildings
, for the car
park
had been enlarged and reduce the size of the sports field and playground.
Moreover
, the science block and
school
building remained the same size as 30 years ago. The main road is still the same from 1950 until 2010.
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