The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
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The maps present the changes that occurred in the West
Park
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Secondary
School
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from 1950 to 1980 and 2010.
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, there was a significant increase in the West
Park
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secondary
school
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, there were many
buildings
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that were renovated and became new
buildings
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and even there were three times changes. In 1950, there were many
buildings
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were built namely Farmland, Playground, Schools, and Houses. Moving to in 1980, the house building had been converted become a Car
Park
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and Science block, and
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, the farmland beside the house building had been changed and it changed become a sports field.
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that, for
school
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and playground still remained. After 30 years, there were significant changes to some
buildings
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, for the car
park
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had been enlarged and reduce the size of the sports field and playground.
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, the science block and
school
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building remained the same size as 30 years ago. The main road is still the same from 1950 until 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, buildings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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