The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the human population of
illiteracy
around the
world
based on the region and gender for the previous year. It is clearly seen that the
illiteracy
rate for both males and females in Southeast Asia was the highest among the rest of the regions of the
world
.
Moreover
, the
illiteracy
rates of females were higher than that of males around the
world
.
However
, in developed countries and Latin America have little difference between male and female
illiteracy
rates compared to other regions. It is noticeable that the
illiteracy
rate of both genders in developed countries was significantly lower than
rest
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of the
world
with around 1% of the population respectively.
On the other hand
, in Southeast Asia, the
illiteracy
rates of both males and females were the highest with around 35% and 55% respectively.
Thisthis
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This
trend is followed by Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa with an approximate population of 30% male and 50% female.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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