The tables provide information about why people travel to destinations out of the country and where they go from 1994 to 1998.

The tables provide information about why people travel to destinations out of the country and where they go from 1994 to 1998.
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The bar graph depicts data about the most common destination for overseas travelling in people from The United Kingdom, between 1994 and 1998,
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the table describes the principal aims of their visits.
Overall
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, Western Europe was the most preferred place,
nevertheless
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, the least chosen were other different areas from the aforementioned place and North America.
On the other hand
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, most travellers selected holidays as the main purpose. In detail, Western Europe began at roughly 20000 in 1995, followed by a slight decrease of approximately 2500, and peaked at almost 25000 in 1998.
In contrast
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, North America and other regions went up gradually, starting just above 0,
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, their values never surpassed more than 2500 over time.
Additionally
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, vacations were the favourite purpose with an upward trend, starting at 15246 and ending at 20700.
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, business and visiting friends and relatives abroad were located in the middle with a maximum of 3957 and 3181, respectively.
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, other reasons fluctuated, hitting a peak at 1054 in 1997,
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went downhill until 990.
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