The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

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information about the stolen car in four different countries from 1990 to 1999

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of Sweden increased significantly ,

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unchanging Moving to a detailed analysis , in

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the indicator of stolen cars stood at about 6 in 1990 , it rose

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to 13

the

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following six years and remained stable

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between 1996 and1998 .

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it increased significantly With regard to other countries , the figures for Canada and France stood at between 5 and 10 ,

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the

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Britain was approximately 18 in 1990 . A gradual decrease was observed in the

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three years .

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there is a

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decrease in Great Britain . The

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that of France and

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Britain followed

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direction as a fluctuated decrease until the end of the period