The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The map
display
the university sports Change the verb form
displays
courts
as it was in 1990 and its appearance now. Overall
, the size of the territory remained the same throughout the period, and the pool and tennis court are
Wrong verb form
were
on
both various. By the present time, the main change is that the Change preposition
apply
park
and car park
were demolished and replaced by additional courts
.
According to
the map, the cafe and the reception remained unchanged, and based on the middle of the area on the north. The changing room which stood below the reception was expanded and moved above the fitness center which was installed instead
of two tennis courts
on the southeast of the map. The outdoor pool on the northeast was converted into an indoor pool.
Furthermore
, the park
on the northwest side was demolished and the basketball court was constructed on
the same place. Change preposition
in
Finally
, there was a car park
on the southwest which was removed and instead
four tennis Add a comma
instead,
courts
were erected.Submitted by lobacheva.design on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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