The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 and predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information about the
life
expectancy
of Asian people
from 1950 to 2300 was
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is
this
chart. There are six regions mentioned with their percentage.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the life
expectancy
of people
of Eastern Asia was the largest percentile in all periods and will remain higher till 2300. While
,
other regions revealed the lower proportions.
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life
expectancy
of people
can be seen in Other Eastern Asia at around 30% in 1950, there was a rapid surge in 2000 to reach about 76%, then
, it will gradually increase throughout the periods and outrace the 100%.
On the other hand
, the life
expectancy
of people
in other regions remained almost at the same percentage rate. Only China was noticed, which rose to approximately 70% between 1950 to 2000. While
others were started from 40% in 1950 and noticed 65% in 2000. After that, it will a steady rise till 2300 and reached
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to
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