Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter ● state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this ● give details of how you have benefited from the club ● explain why you want to leave

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regards to
inform
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you that I will not be able to continue
my
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club
membership
that I took two months before in
Feburary
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February
2023 in your Rotatory
club
. As I remember , I had
join
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for
the
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a
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part time
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association
membership
in which I was able to participate and work
volunteerly
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volunteer
volunteering
for the organization . I paid for my
membership
through the Credit card that was for $150 per month which
use
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to get deducted by itself. Being
the
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member of the
club
I was provided with
ampel
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ample
of
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apply
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opportunity
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opportunities
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to visit different clubs and had
an
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the
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authority to make
decision
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decisions
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on the basis of the
club
.
Addition
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In addition
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to
this
, I was
being
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assigned
the
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duties regarding the records of the the charity that were made by the people for the
center
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centre
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. Unfortunately, I have to leave the
membership
for the
club
as I have got an opportunity from my workplace to earn the experience from the
haed
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head
office of my company which is is abroad.
Due to
this
, I have to leave my current place so I will not be able to carry out
this
membership
anymore. I really appreciate
for
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all the
facitlities
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facilities
that
was
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were
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provided to
my
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me
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by the
club
adnd
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and
want to request if you can help me
out
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to cancel my
memebership
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membership
for
upcoming
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the upcoming
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months. Hope to hear from you soon. Your's Sincerely Gurpreet
kaur
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Kaur
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spelling
Ensure the use of correct spelling for months (e.g., 'February' instead of 'Feburary') and other words to improve readability.
grammar
Review and correct grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement, and use of prepositions.
structure
Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas for better clarity and organization.
sentence structure
Incorporate a more diverse range of sentence structures to enhance the complexity and flow of your writing.
content coverage
You have clearly stated the purpose of your letter and covered all required points.
tone
Your politeness and the formal tone used throughout the letter are appropriate for the context.
closing
You've successfully used a formal sign-off which suits the nature of the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual membership
  • monthly subscription
  • premium membership
  • direct debit
  • credit card payment
  • exclusive events
  • state-of-the-art facilities
  • networking opportunities
  • relocation
  • financial constraints
  • diversifying interests
  • expressing gratitude
  • amicable departure
  • future correspondence
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