Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: Describe the book. Why do you want him/her to read it? Tell him/her to get the book.

Hello Simran, It is been a

while

, I have not heard from you. Hope you are doing great in your life. I was recently drawn towards a new

book

which I got online. Let me tell you in detail. The

book

's name is "An Old Man" by Leo Magnus. It is a fictional storybook. There is an old man in the story whose wife dies and he gets depressed after her wife is gone. Many of his neighbours try to make him happy but he always gets trapped in her thoughts. The story goes like

this

and ends with a very sad scene. I want you to read

this

book

because I know you will definitely like it as you are a great fan of fictional stories. You can get

this

book

online from Amazon and it is not too pricey. Read it and let me know how you find it. Looking forward to hearing from you. Take care of yourself. Yours Sincerely, Kulbeer Kaur

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Task Achievement

Try to expand a little more on why specifically the book might appeal to your friend, considering their interests or previous discussions you've had about similar themes or genres. This can make your suggestion more personalized and compelling.

Coherence and Cohesion

Consider varying your sentence structure and using a wider range of linking words to enhance the flow of ideas from one to another, which can make your writing more dynamic and engaging.

Task Achievement

You did a great job of introducing the topic and describing the book in a clear and concise manner, which makes your letter easy to follow.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your friendly closing salutes add a nice, personal touch, reinforcing the letter's tone and context.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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