Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is positive or a negative development?

Taking care of yourself and your health is vital for human health. Nowadays, some people try alternative medicines and treatments

instead

of visiting a

doctor

. In my opinion,

this

approach is a negative development in

humans

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history. I will discuss and explain my point of view in

this

essay. Self-cure or depending on strange treatments

instead

of visiting a

doctor

is not a rational decision. Looking from an

overall

perspective, it is evident to everyone that, the human body is a complicated structure which needs a

lot

of knowledge to cure or maintain. Doctors spend years in university to study about our bodies, and after a

lot

of dedication and

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eventually, they can eventually cure some illnesses with medicines, so

this

process needs a

lot

of hours of study. There is a

lot

of work that a person can do for well-being,

such

as eating healthy food or exercising daily. Currently, with instant access to the internet, everyone can find a healthy and balanced diet easily and use it in their lifestyle,

however

, it needs a

doctor

that oversees you regularly.

Additionally

, If you do a

lot

of exercise and keep a healthy diet, with a strong body, you can prevent illness. But all of these can not be an alternative to visiting a

doctor

during the period of illness.

To sum up

, despite the fact that you can maintain your health properly, and you should do it with exercise and a healthy diet, you can not ignore doctors' position in curing illnesses. Visiting a

doctor

regularly is necessary even if you are not sick.