The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts how much households earned per year, in the USA, in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, we can see that there were not many differences in income, between the years 2007, and 2011, however
, individuals received more money in 2015, especially more than thirty million
people who got 100,000 or more dollars
in 2015.
Firstly
, in 2007 almost twenty-five million
households earned less than 25,000 dollars
in America, although
this
number
changed and rose slightly and was approximately twenty-eight million
in 2011, also
dropped
a little in 2015. Wrong verb form
dropping
In addition
, the same trend happened to people who got 25,000 and 49,999 dollars
.
Secondly
, 50,000 and 74,999 dollars
receivers
stayed the same during the period given. Change preposition
of receivers
Moreover
, the number
of households who
earned 75,000 and 99,999 decreased gradually in 2011 and was roughly Correct pronoun usage
that
fourteen
Correct your spelling
14
million
, also
, went up a little and turned to fifteen Correct pronoun usage
it also
million
in 2015.
Lastly
, despite the consistent plummet in the number
of individuals who received 100,000 or more dollars
in 2011, we can see a dramatic rise in the number
of people who got 100,000 or more dollars
in 2015, which is about thirty-two million
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