The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts how much households earned per year, in the USA, in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, we can see that there were not many differences in income, between the years 2007, and 2011,
however
, individuals received more money in 2015, especially more than thirty
million
people who got 100,000 or more
dollars
in 2015.
Firstly
, in 2007 almost twenty-five
million
households earned less than 25,000
dollars
in America,
although
this
number
changed and rose slightly and was approximately twenty-eight
million
in 2011,
also
dropped
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a little in 2015.
In addition
, the same trend happened to people who got 25,000 and 49,999
dollars
.
Secondly
, 50,000 and 74,999
dollars
receivers
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of receivers
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stayed the same during the period given.
Moreover
, the
number
of households
who
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that
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earned 75,000 and 99,999 decreased gradually in 2011 and was roughly
fourteen
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14
million
,
also
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it also
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, went up a little and turned to fifteen
million
in 2015.
Lastly
, despite the consistent plummet in the
number
of individuals who received 100,000 or more
dollars
in 2011, we can see a dramatic rise in the
number
of people who got 100,000 or more
dollars
in 2015, which is about thirty-two
million
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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