The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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bar chart depicts how much households earned per year, in the USA, in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

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, we can see that there were not many differences in income, between the years 2007, and 2011,

however

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, individuals received more money in 2015, especially more than thirty

million

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people who got 100,000 or more

dollars

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in 2015.

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, in 2007 almost twenty-five

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households earned less than 25,000

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in America,

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this

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number

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changed and rose slightly and was approximately twenty-eight

million

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in 2011,

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dropped

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a little in 2015.

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, the same trend happened to people who got 25,000 and 49,999

dollars

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, 50,000 and 74,999

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receivers

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of receivers

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stayed the same during the period given.

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, the

number

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of households

who

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earned 75,000 and 99,999 decreased gradually in 2011 and was roughly

fourteen

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million

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also

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, went up a little and turned to fifteen

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in 2015.

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, despite the consistent plummet in the

number

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of individuals who received 100,000 or more

dollars

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in 2011, we can see a dramatic rise in the

number

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of people who got 100,000 or more

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in 2015, which is about thirty-two

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

household distribution
income brackets
annual income
percentage change
trend analysis
income group
significant increase/decrease
steady growth/decline
fluctuations
compared to
in contrast
notably
median income
poverty line
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