The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in different years

The pie charts below show the devices  people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in different  years
The pie chart displays the technological gadgets which
people
used the watch
television
age of between 18 and 25 in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
Firstly
, in 2009 most
people
used to watch
television
from their conventional televisions, followed by laptops which had 20 per
cent
but desktop computer ratio was lower than laptops and its rate was 18 per
cent
.
People
who watched
television
from mobile phones were in the fourth line followed by flat-screen
TV
and only a small group of individuals who watched
television
from tablets ratio was 5 per
cent
.
Secondly
, watching
television
from conventional
TV
had decreased to 4 per
cent
, it is in the bottom line and its place was replaced by a flat-screen
TV
, which is 27 per
cent
followed by mobile phones, their ratios were nearly the same. The tablet rate had increased by 14 per
cent
and it was in third place and for
people
who watched
television
from a laptop and desktop computer rates were 12 per
cent
.
To sum up
, in ten years individuals watching
television
habits changed drastically , especially with tablets, conventional
TV
and flat-screen
TV
.
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