Describe a rule that is important in your school or at work. You should say: What the rule is about what happens when people break the rule. why you think it is an important rule and explain how you feel about the rule?

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I believe that
rules
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play a vital role in shaping people and the environment.
Rules
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are everywhere and we should obey them in order to live a peaceful
life
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. Today I would like to talk about a rule which is important at my workplace and the rule is not to grow nails. So, at
workplace
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the workplace
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, we cannot grow our nails because we work with small
children
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. As small
children
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's skin is very delicate, we cannot have longer nails as it can harm
children
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's skin.
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that, we
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have a rule of not eating junk
food
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in front of small
children
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because they would imitate us. Eating junk
food
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is not a healthy option, We encourage
children
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to eat healthy
food
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every day. So, whenever we are eating in front of
children
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we cannot have junk
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otherwise
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children
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will
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do the same. If we break any of the
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at school we get a memo, a memo is like a fine which is not good for a teacher to earn and if we get 3 memos we will be terminated from the school. In order to not get that memo we take care of school
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, So that we do not lose our job. I think
rules
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are very important as they discipline our lives in a very different way. I
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agree with my workplace
rules
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and I love to follow them. When I follow
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I feel very confident and comfortable in my
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. Without
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life
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is boring.
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why
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are crucial in an individual's
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and they help us to lead a successful
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.
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To improve your response, consider providing a more detailed introduction that clearly outlines the upcoming discussion. Additionally, incorporating a concise conclusion that summarizes your main points can enhance the overall structure of your speech.
language
Consider varying your sentence structures more to create a more engaging and dynamic narrative. For example, mix simple, compound, and complex sentences to keep the reader's interest.
content
You've effectively used relevant and specific examples to illustrate why the rules are important, which greatly strengthens your argument.
structure
Your use of a clear and logical structure in discussing the rule, its consequences, and its importance helps in making your speech easily understandable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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