The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
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, how often
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Americans
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consumed fast food in restaurants over a period of 10 years between 2003 and 2013. Looking from
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an overall
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perspective,
least
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folks prefer to eat
on
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every day
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never .
Majority
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ate once in week and twice
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a month which is
highest
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in
given
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chart . Starting with people who eat
everyday
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is under 5% in 2003 ,2006 and 2013 respectively .
While
several times a week approximately 17 % in 2003 ,exactly 20%
2006
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and just over
15%in
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15 in
2013 .But Once in a week above 30% in 2003 followed by around 33% in 2006 ,
between
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25% to 30% in 2013 . 
On the other hand
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30 per
cent
and 25 per
cent
respectively and approximately 33 per
cent
.
Also
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a few times a year is in the middle of 10 and 15
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in
year
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2003 where
as
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similar
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a similar
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position with 15 per
cent
in 2006 and 2013. Public who never visit
to
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restaurants
are
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below 15
percent
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in all given years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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