The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
The bar chart
illustrate
, how often Change the verb form
illustrates
American's
consumed fast food in restaurants over a period of 10 years between 2003 and 2013.
Looking from Change noun form
Americans
Linking Words
overall
perspective, Add an article
an overall
the overall
least
folks prefer to eat Change preposition
at least
on
every day Change preposition
apply
as well as
never .Linking Words
Majority
ate once in week and twice Add an article
The majority
in
a month which is Change preposition
apply
highest
in Correct article usage
the highest
given
chart .
Starting with people who eat Correct article usage
the given
everyday
is under 5% in 2003 ,2006 and 2013 respectively . Replace the word
every day
While
several times a week approximately 17 % in 2003 ,exactly 20% Linking Words
2006
and just over Change preposition
in 2006
15%in
2013 .But Once in a week above 30% in 2003 followed by around 33% in 2006 , Correct your spelling
15 in
between
25% to 30% in 2013 .
Correct word choice
and between
On the other hand
, once or twice a month in 2003 and 2013 Linking Words
are
30 per Wrong verb form
were
cent
and 25 per Use synonyms
cent
respectively and approximately 33 per Use synonyms
cent
. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Also
a few times a year is in the middle of 10 and 15 Add a comma
Also,
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
year
2003 where Change the article
the year
as
Correct your spelling
a
similar
position with 15 per Add an article
a similar
the similar
cent
in 2006 and 2013. Public who never visit Use synonyms
to
restaurants Remove the preposition
apply
are
below 15 Change the verb form
is
percent
in all given years.Change the spelling
per cent
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