In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Today in many areas,individuals are living longer than before. Some

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think that the old population creates problems for authorities,

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others believe there are

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if there are more elderly

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in society. In my point of view,

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can outweigh

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in

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of

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and

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,the potential

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for healthcare and the highest level of death.

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with, the

benefits

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can be in

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of wide

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and valuable

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. The vast majority of

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older

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are playing

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crucial roles in companies.

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,many of them are leaders,

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the fact that they have to stay and maintain the quality and sales,mostly because of their own

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and knowledge of how business works and how to make

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in extreme situations.

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recent survey in Russia showed that many employees prefer to work in the company with a guide,who is older and they can trust him in

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of wages and future opportunities.

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,the potential

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such

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as funding for healthcare and high mortality rates. Nowadays, authorities should create some

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,where ageing populations can easily get

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protection against disease and have regular access to healthcare,

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,

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question requires more money for medical employees and a wide selection of good medicines.

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,in Japan, a vast number of

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are aged,

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the fact that the government allows them access to hospital facilities at a discount,which maintains their health and protects them against disease.

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,if authorities do not share their budget to

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point,the population will decrease significantly,which will be a serious problem

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the gene pool.

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, the question of the older population has advantages in

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of making

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decisions

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and valuable

experience

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many are working in

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companies,where they hold top positions.

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,the potential

drawbacks

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can be in economic conditions,where governments have to share their funding for good medicine. In

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question, the

benefits

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outweigh the

drawbacks

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.