The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries and how the population is distributed

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries and how the population is distributed
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The pie charts present data on how various countries spent and consumed
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resources and inhabitants is dispensed.
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shows that Asia was the most significant part of the world population
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and the USA and Europe accounted for three-fifths of the consumption of resources
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, was the least significant fraction of the
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of spending.
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, Europe and America share the same proportion . Both of them made up 14 per cent of the population’s
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. Africa and other countries constituted 10% and 5% of the population’s
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, respectively . America and Europe constituted 60% of the consumption of resources
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;
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,merely two-fifths of the total consumption was derived from others. Turning to the world spending , food, housing and transport comprised slightly above 50 per cent of spending , collectively .
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, nearly a quarter of the total spending comes from the clothing sector and others were responsible for the biggest part of the proportion in the spending
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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