The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.
The figures illustrate the financial allocation of the British Police between 2017 and 2018. The table shows the list of income,
whereas
the pie chart compares the expenditure.
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Overall
, the total income increased from 2017 to 2018. The biggest source for the police in both years was from the national government. Linking Words
Then
, they allocated a huge expense on the officer's and staff's salaries.
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To begin
with, there was around a 14.1 Linking Words
million
increment in the total income within the period. The all-time highest source was from the national government with a 2.3 Use synonyms
million
increment but the Local Taxes had the biggest surge at 10.1 Use synonyms
million
. Other than that, other sources Use synonyms
such
as grants only add up to about 0.5 Linking Words
million
.
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Next,
the police utilized the majority of the budget for their staff's salaries, Linking Words
however
, the percentage decreased from 75% to 69% in 2018. Linking Words
Besides
, they Linking Words
also
paid for technology tools to support the office's operation with a constant ratio of 17%. Linking Words
Lastly
, the fraction for buildings and transport went up from 8% to 14% Linking Words
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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