The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after construction. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuresl and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after construction.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuresl and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the changes before and following the building of
Benfield
Neighbourhood
. Before the construction, there were many trees, a
barn
, and a
cornfield
,
although
many homes
are
Wrong verb form
were
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built after it, and a new
road
is
Wrong verb form
was
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replaced by the fence. Before the construction, the
neighbourhood
was divided into three areas; the woods were on the left, the
cornfield
was on the right below, and the settlement area was on the right over the
cornfield
. There was a
road
from the south to the north of the
Benfield
in the middle of the right and left.
Cornfield
and the settlement region
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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separated by a fence. There was a
barn
and a farm in the place
that
Correct word choice
where
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people lived. Throughout the construction of the
Benfield
, a lot of trees were cut.
Moreover
, the
barn
and the
cornfield
were replaced by new houses, meanwhile, a new
road
is
Wrong verb form
was
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built between the old
cornfield
and the settlement area,
also
the fence
is
Wrong verb form
was
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removed. There are quite a few trees
is
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still in the park, though.
Park
Correct article usage
The park
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is situated below in the left part of
Benfield
Neighbourhood
.
Overall
, after building many homes in the
neighbourhood
, there is still a park so that families can spend time with their family and friends.
In addition
to
this
, a new
road
was constructed
in
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between the old
barn
and the field.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words benfield, neighbourhood, barn, cornfield, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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