The diagram below shows the area around a river before and after a flood. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features1 and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the area around a river before and after a flood.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features1 and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts a territory around the Blackstone
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river
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River
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prior to and following a flood. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that many things were washed away by the floodwaters.
Initially
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, there was a big bend in the
river
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called an Oxbow. A subsequent overwhelming flow of it has changed the land and the
river
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with the straight stream. The Blackstone sharp turn has been transformed
to
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into
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an Oxbow lake. In general, a housing area was on both riverbanks and next to it where a nearby bridge crossed the
river
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.
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, trees grew on each side of the Blackstone. During the natural process, the residential area has diminished. Now, the houses only are situated next to the
river
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on the right side
while
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on each cost buildings have been removed.
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, some trees and the bridge have been taken down. The once peaceful landscape has suffered from the flood, indicating a shift in urban development and natural progression.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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