The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year
The pie charts show the amount of
revenue
and expenditures over a year of a children's charity in the USA. Overall
, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income
,
while
program services accounted for the most expenditure. Total revenue
souree
just exceeded
outgoings. In detail, donated food provided most of the Correct your spelling
source
revenue
for the charity, at 86%. Similarly
, with regard to expenditures, one category, program services, accounted for nearly all of the outgoings,
at 95.8%. The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions, which were the second largest revenue
source, brought in 10.4% of overall
income
, and this
was followed by program revenue
, at 2.2%. Investment income
, government grants, and other income
were very small
sources of revenue
, accounting for only 0.8% combined. There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. The total amount of income
was $53,561,580, which
was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53,224,896.Submitted by quluzadenurlan107 on
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