Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for?
Hi Mom and Dad
I hope everything is well with you. Dad, what's your colleague "John" doing? Mom, I miss your mouthwatering cookies.
I'm writing to invite you two to my graduation event which is going to be held next Wednesday 27th of October.
Finally
, I finished my studies after a long time I was far from you. I had lots of challenges plus not having you beside myself. Forget them.
Let's tell you more about the event. Every student has 5 tickets for his guests. I've decided to invite Grandpa and Grandma as well. Isn't it interesting for them to be present on their first grandchild's graduation day?
By the way, you must dress formally, as all of the university professors and the Education Minister are in the event.
Please, don't forget to be on time and also
bring grannies.
Look forward to seeing you soon.
Love,
DannySubmitted by keyhan454 on
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coherence cohesion
You've done a great job expressing warmth and personality in your letter. To enhance your writing further, consider transitioning between ideas more smoothly to maintain coherence.
task achievement
You might include a bit more detail about the event itself or express more about the significance of your parents attending. This adds depth to your task response.
coherence cohesion
Your use of personal anecdotes and queries about your parents' lives adds a lovely personal touch to your letter.
task achievement
Clearly stating the event details, including the date, time, and dress code, effectively fulfills the task requirements.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,