Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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  • innovation
  • operational efficiency
  • precision
  • accuracy
  • hazardous
  • technological advancement
  • displacement
  • skill gap
  • accountability
  • privacy
  • economic inequality
  • initial investment
  • manual labor
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • marginal error
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