The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
Presented here are two maps illustrating changes in the town of Norbiton from the present to the foreseeable future. Broadly speaking, the transformation involves the demolition of most factories to make way for residential development.
Furthermore
, the town has undergone noticeable changes with the addition of various public amenities and updates to the road network. Starting with the northeastern part of the town, a playground is planned to be constructed over the site of two former factory buildings that have been converted into houses.
Additionally
, a new school is proposed to be located
at the end
of a road that will replace an existing industrial plant. Moving to the southeastern area, a new medical
center
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is set to be established. Other significant changes include local infrastructure improvements
such
as the installation of a roundabout at the T-junction.
Furthermore
, near the four-way intersection, one of the factories will be transformed into a shop,
while
others will be demolished to expand roads and construct new housing units.
Lastly
, on the opposite side of the river, a new road will be constructed,
along with
the development of a residential area.
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