Two maps show the change of a coastal town called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the modification in a town located by the sea so-called Pentland between 1950 and 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main roads and two pathways to the west and east remain unchanged. However
, a lot of recreational facilities and accommodations are set in.
On the one hand, the sea was changed to a yacht marina which is surrounded by a new semi-circular roadway. Furthermore
, a park and apartments sprung up on both sides of the port, left and right respectively. The old car park was relocated to the west of the town instead
of the industrial area and its function was redesigned into a multi-story. Moreover
, a swimming pool was constructed near the new parking lots.
On the other hand
, the grassland which is located to the right-hand side of the roads was obliterated and replaced by a new route which has five houses on each side. On the opposite side of the new residential area, a cinema was designed. In addition
, fourteen shops appeared along both sides of the old main route.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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