The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.

The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.
The table shows portions of predicted costing in three countries and the pie chart demonstrates spending costs
among
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year
.
Overall
, the
expenses
in West Africa and Central America were less in
next
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5 years
while
in
South-east
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Asia were much more. The pie chart shows a percentage of
projectured
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projected
expenditure which has the largest amount head for salaries and the least for training and office
expenses
. Turning into more details, predicted
costing
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in West Africa started
with
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10.5
million
in
year
1 and
then
slowed down
in
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3.5
million
in
year
5. In Central America
also
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of
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expenses
from 20
million
(in
year
1) to 5
million
(in
year
5). As an exception in
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Southeast
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Asia
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Asia,
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the
amount
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of
spendings
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increased from 30
million
(in
year
1) to 50
million
in the
last
year
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it can be clearly seen that
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half of
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expenditure goes to salaries (50%), set-up costs (30%), 10% for training and
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10% for office
expenses
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Projected costing
  • Sustainable forestry
  • Environmental projects
  • Expenditure breakdown
  • Financial commitment
  • Allocation of funds
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Deforestation
  • Technological advancements
  • Policy changes
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