The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.
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The table shows portions of predicted costing in three countries and the pie chart demonstrates spending costs
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projected
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million
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