Essay topics: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. write a letter to your friend In your letter * say how you feel about the visit * suggest what you could do on his/her birthday *try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea
Dear Godek,
Hi
Godek Add the punctuation
Hi,
i
Change the capitalization
I
trush
Correct your spelling
trust
this
letter to find
you well and Wrong verb form
finds
i
hope you stay healthy and Change the capitalization
I
fun
.
So when you are visit my Add a missing verb
have fun
home
in senggigi
village you will Change the capitalization
Senggigi
fell
enjoy Correct your spelling
feel
because
my hometown famous Correct pronoun usage
it because
about
the destination that why you are Change preposition
for
fell
enjoy your journey. Verb problem
feeling good
Besides
local people will approach you such
as artis.
That is
good also
if you want to make
a party at my Verb problem
have
home
because a growing number of my friend
will Fix the agreement mistake
friends
coming
to my Change the verb form
come
be coming
home
,therefore
you will feel satisfied stay
and Replace the word
staying
party
at my Wrong verb form
partying
home
especially
for Add the comma(s)
, especially
you
birthday. Change the pronoun
your
Besides
i
would make a lot of traditional food and local Change the capitalization
I
drink
for Fix the agreement mistake
drinks
you
party, so just Change the pronoun
your
calm
and fun at my Add a missing verb
be calm
home
to enjoy with
Change preposition
apply
a
stunning food from my island.
If you Correct article usage
apply
intrest
Replace the word
are interested
with
my idea please just Change preposition
in
imform
me and of course Correct your spelling
inform
i
Change the capitalization
I
dirrectly
prepare about you will arrive Correct your spelling
directly
to
my countryside my brother, and of course Change preposition
in
i
feel exhilarated if you seriously come to my Change the capitalization
I
home
.
From this
letter
Add a comma
letter,
i
just wanna say thank you very much if you visit my Capitalize word
I
home
and meet with my big familly
here.
Best your brother
Ajiburrachman,Correct your spelling
family
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coherence cohesion
Try to use more varied sentence structures and avoid repetition to make your writing more engaging.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your ideas flow logically from one to the next by using clear transition words or phrases.
task achievement
Fully address all parts of the prompt to make your response as complete as possible.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable writing tone throughout your letter for a more cohesive reading experience.
task achievement
You've expressed excitement and care about your friend's visit, which is very positive.
task achievement
The informal tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, adding a personal and warm touch to your writing.
coherence cohesion
Your ideas about celebrating the birthday are imaginative and show thoughtfulness.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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