The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The picture beneath conveys the plan of one of the floors in a public library 20 years ago and today.
Overall
, we can see, that the library developed in the technology field. In addition
, some of the old-fashion corners were destroyed.
As we can see, the corner where people could watch CDs, videos, and computer games was replaced with a place where people can
hold storytelling events and there are two sofas at present. Wrong verb form
could
Furthermore
, children's books
which were near this
room
replaced in the storytelling room
. Instead
of adult fiction books
which were opposite the storytelling room
, replaced with all reference books
, and adult books
is
replaced opposite the lecture Wrong verb form
were
room
.
Additionally
, information desks and self-service machines are placed instead
of adult non-fiction books
. One corner room
, where you can read newspapers and magazines replaced with a computer room
. Moreover
, the enquiry desk near the entrance was replaced with a cafe. In the center
of the floor, there were tables and chairs 20 years ago, Change the spelling
centre
however
, nowadays, it is disappearing.Submitted by dnm.best on
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