some people believe that if people are not allowed to work after the age of 60, it cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?

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would be changed through

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process of life.

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, it is debated that the elderly should retire after

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certain age compulsorily, and others

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that forceful retirement leads to a plethora of harmful problems. I advocate for the latter and in the following paragraph, it will be defended. It is universally acknowledged that

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retirement is an inseparable part of life. In some countries, citizens must be retired by employers,

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. It is readily apparent that tolerating

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because they undergo financial issues. To put it differently,

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, as a main source of livelihood, will be deprived of old employees. So forth financial issues jeopardize not only mental but

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physical health and

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, retired people have to work as

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of resting because of

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economy in Iran.

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, it is undeniable that the aged employees have achieved

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of experience over

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and it definitely assists the work performance even for next generation, too. Despite the fact that it is believed that

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jobs by the old causes fewer

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positions for the youth, the importance of their experience plays a significant role in efficiency.

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unreasonable because the nature of occupations is various.

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, there is a researching and developing part in factories which is conducted by the experienced workers;

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, other duties like controlling and manufacturing are carried on by the youngest ones.

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, putting pressure on the elderly people to retire would not be the best solution because it will make them face financial

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, and

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factories require talented, knowledgeable employees.