Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wished. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Children

's freedom about their choices has an integral part in

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behaviour. It is,

therefore

, not surprising to see how it has caused a controversy among

people

about whether

children

should make their own decisions about all

matter

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or not. Freedom leads to positive impacts like

begin

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self-confidence

but unlimited freedom causes several

problem

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, because of that some

people

firmly support their argument,

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adamantly object to it. I have solid reasons to agree with both two of which are being selfish and

self-confidence

.

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with,

supporter

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of

this

matter

claim that begin human brings to live in society for better conditions.

This

is a very convincing argument because when teenager

decided

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own

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idea by only thinking about themself lead

to

begin

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selfish. The most crucial part of

this

debate is being selfish can

firstly

damage

relationship

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relationships

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with friends, family, or co-workers. It may be argued that

this

is very important for

children

's

behaviours

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behaviour

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.

For example

, if one student only thinks about their

hungry

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, he or she

do

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not share their

foods

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food

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with other friends.

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, empathy

play

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a significant role in

this

issue. In short, the

advocate

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of

this

matter

point out that exploring

they

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self since they

are

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strongly claim

this

is rational.

On the other hand

, opponents of

this

matter

have a different point of view. They emphasize that

children

who make decisions by self-lead

to begin

self-confidence

.

This

is a quite satisfactory argument depending on

fact

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the fact

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that

self-confidence

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self-confident

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people

are more active and creative than shy's. It is worth stating that

this

is a persuasive point as trying by themself and seeing the result of the situation can bloom

children

’s behaviours and perspective of

live

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life

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. In brief, personal choices

give

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allow

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children

to express their self to the world

by

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through

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personal experiences.

To conclude

,

people

have a totally different perspective

about

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this

debt.

Nevertheless

, when everything is taken into account, I am inclined to believe that there should be a delicate balance between these two arguments.