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The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following illustration depicts 10
countries
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 with the highest
petrol
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 prices including the average monthly
income
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, and the amount of money that the population of those
countries
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 spend,
along with
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 the
percentage
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 of monthly
income
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spend
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spent
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 on
petrol
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. As a whole, we can observe that the expenditure on
petrol
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 in each country is quite similar, they spend around 300 dollars.
However
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, the
percentage
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 of monthly
income
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 spent on
petrol
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 differs a lot.
Also
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, it is worth mentioning that the majority of the
countries
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 shown are in Europe, except
of
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for
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 Eritrea and Turkey
that
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which
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 are located in Africa and Asia, respectively.
Countries
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 with the highest average monthly
income
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 spend the
least
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lowest
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percentage
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 of their
salary
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 on
petrol
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,
while
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countries
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 with the lowest
income
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 spend the highest
percentage
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 of their
income
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 on
petrol
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.
For example
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, Norway with the highest average
salary
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 spends only 7.4% of their
income
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 on
petrol
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,
while
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 in Eritrea people with 450.09$ average
salary
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 spend more than half of their
salary
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 on
petrol
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, petrol, income, percentage, salary with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographical distribution
  • per capita income
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • correlate
  • anomalies
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
  • external factors
  • oil production rates
  • import dependencies
  • subsidies
  • taxation policies
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