The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.

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per year of teachers in high schools in five countries in different parts of the world in 2009.

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per year information was divided into three periods starting from the beginning of the career, 15

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later and the maximum figure. Numbers of

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taken to get the highest amount are

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Luxembourg was in the top position with the highest figure in all three periods. It started from 80,000

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on the first day of being a teacher.

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, it will increase up to 112,000

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in 15

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later.

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, it takes 30

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to reach the top

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of 139,000

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Denmark had the second highest

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when starting the career in 2009 at 47,000

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. It will rise to 54,000

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after 8

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of working and

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the maximum figure for

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country.

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, Australia’s teachers got 34,600

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on their first day. It will climb up to 48,000

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after 9

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and

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the capped amount.

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gross income
net income
cost of living
purchasing power parity (PPP)
economic indicators
wage disparity
median wage
livable wage
compensation package
inflation rate
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The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.

An increasing number of professional, such as doctors an teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in develop countries. What problems does this cause? what can be done to deal with this situation?

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Atlantic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

The rise off social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?v