The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
The provided table shows the
salary
per year of teachers in high schools in five countries in different parts of the world in 2009.
Overall
, salary
per year information was divided into three periods starting from the beginning of the career, 15 years
later and the maximum figure. Numbers of years
taken to get the highest amount are also
presented.
First,
Luxembourg was in the top position with the highest figure in all three periods. It started from 80,000 USD
on the first day of being a teacher. Then
, it will increase up to 112,000 USD
in 15 years
later. In addition
, it takes 30 years
to reach the top salary
of 139,000 USD
. Second,
Denmark had the second highest salary
when starting the career in 2009 at 47,000 USD
. It will rise to 54,000 USD
after 8 years
of working and that is
the maximum figure for this
country. Finally
, Australia’s teachers got 34,600 USD
on their first day. It will climb up to 48,000 USD
after 9 years
and that is
the capped amount.Submitted by Punpun on
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