The diagrams below show a community center's changes in the last ten years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram shows the layout of a community centre in the
last
10 years ago compared with the current condition.
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Overall
, the size of the premise remains unchanged. Some sections were removed and there are some facilities were added.
As can be seen, the hall, parking, kitchen and reception areas remain unchanged from 10 years ago. Linking Words
However
, four offices and the storage room located next to the kitchen were turned into the café Linking Words
area
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instead
. At present, the café Linking Words
area
is significantly bigger than what it was. Use synonyms
In addition
, the café and toilets next to the reception Linking Words
area
were replaced by the office. The number of offices was reduced from four to one. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the garden on the left side of the hall was substituted by an indoor sports court. Linking Words
Finally
, the size of the storage room on the right side of the garden decreased Linking Words
due to
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allocation for the toilet.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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