The diagrams below show a community center's changes in the last ten years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram shows the layout of a community centre in the
last
10 years ago compared with the current condition.
Overall
, the size of the premise remains unchanged. Some sections were removed and there are some facilities were added.
As can be seen, the hall, parking, kitchen and reception areas remain unchanged from 10 years ago. However
, four offices and the storage room located next to the kitchen were turned into the café area
instead
. At present, the café area
is significantly bigger than what it was. In addition
, the café and toilets next to the reception area
were replaced by the office. The number of offices was reduced from four to one. Moreover
, the garden on the left side of the hall was substituted by an indoor sports court. Finally
, the size of the storage room on the right side of the garden decreased due to
the area
allocation for the toilet.Submitted by Punpun on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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