The graph shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The line graph compares the recycling rate of

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paper

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and

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cupboard

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,

glass

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, aluminium cans,

plastics

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and plastics

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between 1982 and 2010.

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, points of recycled

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were

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firstly

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decreased slowly and

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the range of recovered

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were

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decreased slightly

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the number of recycled other items

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increased. In 1982, the rate of recycled

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and

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cupboard

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was about the degree of 65

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that

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was fluctuate

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between 65 and 80 from 1982 to 1994. Until 2010 the degree of recovered

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and

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was

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dropped slightly to 70. The

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of

glass

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was 50 in 1982 and

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it went down slowly to 40 in 1990. The recycled

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were gone

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up significantly to 60 in 2010. The

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of recovered

aluminum

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cans was about 5 in 1986 and

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the range of recycled aluminium cans per cent was growth substantially to more than 40 in 2010. The

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of the showtime of the rate of recovered plastics was less than 5 and the

happened

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time of that was 1990 and until 2010 the recycled plastic per cent was increased slightly to less than 10.