The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today
The given maps compare the public
park
between 1920 and today.
Overall
, it can be seen that the layout of the park
has been changed significantly except for the entrances to Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street.
The park
first opened in 1920 and over time, many facilities have been changed and built more various areas. It can be seen that the central fountain has been demolished, and around the periphery were many rose gardens scattered with the seating arrangements, however
, now all of the gardens have been combined into a single one to replace the fountain. Moreover
, the stage for musicians on the left side has been renovated into an amphitheater
for concerts.
Taking a look in the right corner, the pond for water plants has been replaced by the play area for children with a café next to it. Meanwhile, the glasshouse has been redesigned with a water feature and not only to save the space for the Change the spelling
amphitheatre
park
, they also
built an entrance underground car park
for guests serving.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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